My very first Asian motive song lyrics.

= At my very first Music Business Seminar what I have produced as the vice president for Squamish Songwriters Association my speaker for subject of Music Publishing was mister Cliff Jones of Rock Headquarters ( Bruce Allen Talent ) in Vancouver. Cliff in his lecture did say that he was feeling bad that no one to that day was able to come up with new song such as Tokyo Rose by the Idle Eyes what came to be their hit. = Well since I am an Czech born lyricist in out of curiosity I did give it a thought if I would be able to write a song lyrics with a Asian motive that would resemble song Tokyo Rose and so I did write a Put down your coin and play ! = I did leave a plenty of room in the part - Put down your coin and play for the composer to do his or her magic and in the end I came to be very satisfied with these lyrics.
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Sad part is that no matter that English is my second language in my belief I have done outstanding job with it.
But despite to that to this day no one did ever showed any interest in it.
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Where did I go wrong ?